Info-Maybe give an intro instead of just going straight to Oceanic -Continental Convergence and maybe give more info.
Media-add a picture or video at least maybe a picture for each paragraph.
Punctuation-your punctuation is good
Spelling-only one thing in your third sentence of the first paragraph you did oc eanictic you added a space there.
Capitals-you need to capitalize alot of words I am not even going to list them so just go over the page
Otherwise Good job!
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Dragon
1/3/2012 11:59:32 am
Media: On media you need to add either a video or a picture on it.
Information: You need to add more information on the oceanic-continental convergence and more information on all of the parts.
Punctuation: Your punctuation is great.
Capitals: You have alot of errors, to many to list. So work on that page.
Spelling:You spelt oceanic wrong so go over that.
Grammar: Your grammar is good keep up the good work.
Good job!
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