Hello agin thanks for all the great feed back on all my other post and please feel free to post again and tell me anything I have to fix or work on thanks!
Mickey awesome job I really like that you put mohs hardness scale. but maybe you should add a little more info. other than that great job. :)
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Joe Joltz
12/15/2011 12:42:36 pm
Crystal Structure:
- Add an image.
- You spelled crystal wrong.
- Why are you including the 6 characteristics on this page? It should be focused on only crystal structure.
Hardness:
- Add more info since you only have one sentence.
- Get a better picture describing Mohs scale.
Lustre:
- Add an image.
- Get more information. Again, you only have one line.
Colour:
- Capitalize your C on the title.
- You have grammatical issues on the second sentence.
- Add more info I'm sure you could explain an example of the different elements changing the colour.
Streak:
- Get a new image because that's not a very good one.
- For got the "n" at the end of your first word.
- Explain that it has to be rubbed on unglazed porcelain tile.
- You have grammatical problems on the first, second sentence.
- After the first time saying "7" put a period and make it into two sentences.
- Forgot a space at the end of the third sentence.
- The forth sentence and on are just repeating what you said earlier.
Cleavage and Fracture:
- You have to fix your grammar throughout the whole page.
- Find a less blurry image.
- It's not easy to understand.
Look over the slide show we got for some info.
:)
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Mr. Hong
12/15/2011 02:00:05 pm
@ Joe - You are giving your classmates great feedback! Keep up the good work!
@ Mickey - Think about putting all 6 characteristics on one page and then you do not have to have 6 separate drop down menus. I think this would look much cleaner. Also, you need to add more information in each of your characteristic sections. Please review the slideshow for more info.
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